Business Storytelling

The Commodity Trap: Speak VP Language, Not Vendor Language

The moment you tell a prospect what you do, you've lost. Not the deal, the pricing power. The second a buyer can name your category, web design, fractional CFO, brand strategy, lead generation, their brain files you next to every other vendor who does the same thing, and the only lever left to pull is price. You didn't get commoditized by competitors. You commoditized yourself the instant you led with your deliverables instead of their world. The real question isn't "how do I describe my service better?" It's "why am I describing my service at all before I've out-articulated the shift reshaping the client's industry?" To escape the commodity trap, refuse to answer "what do you do?" until you've answered "what's happening in my industry, and what should I do about it?", buyers who feel understood pay a premium and invite you to the table before scope is defined , which inverts the bidding war so price becomes the last conversation, not the first.

Joshua Agonya Pi'Rwot

By Joshua Agonya Pi'Rwot

Founder, Business Growth Accelerator

Executive summary

Listing your services commoditizes you and starts a price war. Speak VP language, name the client's industry shift first, to escape it and earn the premium.

Section 1

Key takeaways

• The moment a buyer can name your category, you're priced against everyone in it. The escape is a point of view on their industry, not a sharper service description. • 54% of B2B decision-makers say a competitor's thought leadership made them realize another supplier understood their challenges better, incumbency and a tidy services list protect no one . • 60% of decision-makers will pay a premium to work with an organization whose thought leadership demonstrates real understanding, that premium is the direct antidote to the price war. • 86% will invite an organization with strong thought leadership into the RFP process , meaning a demonstrated point of view earns the seat before deliverables are ever discussed. • In the 2025 Edelman-LinkedIn survey of 3,484 executives, 56% of target buyers use thought leadership as part of vendor evaluation, point of view is now a buying criterion, not marketing decoration.

Section 2

Why does naming your category cost you the deal?

Categories are comparison machines. The instant a prospect can slot you into one, "oh, you're a brand agency," "you're a fractional ops person", they stop evaluating you and start evaluating the category, and every category has a going rate. You become a row in a spreadsheet next to three other rows, distinguished by a single sortable column: price. This is the mechanical reason "listing your services" is so dangerous. A services list is, functionally, an invitation to comparison-shop. "We do strategy, design, and implementation" tells the buyer exactly which other vendors to put you up against. It answers the question that triggers price comparison, what do you do?, instead of the question that triggers trust, do you understand what's happening to me? Consider a real example. Two fractional CFOs pitch the same Series A SaaS company. The first opens with scope: monthly close, board deck prep, cash-flow modeling, fundraising support, a clean, professional list. The second opens with a sentence the founder has been losing sleep over: "Most Series A SaaS companies are about to discover their 2021-era unit economics don't survive contact with a market where capital costs money again, and the board is going to start asking about CAC payback in a way it never did before." The first CFO is now competing on hourly rate against every other fractional CFO in the buyer's inbox. The second CFO is the only person in the conversation who named the thing keeping the founder up at night. One of them is in a bidding war. The other one is having a different conversation entirely, and gets to name a price later, after the buyer already wants them specifically. That gap isn't charisma or sales talent. It's the difference between vendor language and VP language, and the data says buyers reward the difference with money and access.

Section 3

The data: understanding outranks both incumbency and capability

Here's the part founders underestimate. Demonstrated industry understanding doesn't just win new business, it actively destabilizes relationships your competitors thought were locked. 54% of B2B decision-makers say a competitor's thought leadership made them realize there were other suppliers, with a better understanding of the challenges their organization faces, that they could work with . Read that carefully: the content didn't list a better service. It demonstrated a better grasp of the buyer's situation, and that alone pried open a door the buyer hadn't known was unlocked. Incumbency offers no shelter from this. 70% of decision-makers say a piece of thought leadership has at least occasionally led them to question whether they should continue working with an existing supplier . The vendor who's been billing that account for three years, who has the relationship, the historical context, the switching-cost moat, gets quietly re-examined the moment someone else articulates the client's world more sharply. A tidy capabilities deck and a long tenure protect no one against a competitor who can out-understand them on the page. And the upside isn't just defensive. 60% of decision-makers say good thought leadership makes them willing to pay a premium to work with that organization . This is the single most important number for any service operator who's tired of the race to the bottom. The premium isn't earned by being cheaper, faster, or more comprehensive, it's earned by being the vendor who clearly comprehends the buyer's reality. When you've done that, price stops being the deciding variable, because the buyer is no longer shopping a category; they're trying to work with you. This isn't a fringe behavior or a marketing department's wishful thinking. In the 2025 Edelman-LinkedIn report, a survey of 3,484 global business executives, 56% of target buyers and 55% of hidden buyers use thought leadership as part of their vendor evaluation process . "Hidden buyers" matters here: these are the stakeholders in the buying committee you never get a meeting with, the ones who influence the decision without ever taking your call. As Anthony Marshall, Senior Research Director for Thought Leadership at the IBM Institute for Business Value, frames the problem: "How do you impact the opinions of individuals you may not even be able to identify? Traditional marketing won't do it. But quality thought leadership can." You cannot out-pitch a person you'll never meet. You can only out-understand their industry on a page they'll read without you in the room.

Section 4

What is "VP language" versus "vendor language"?

Vendor language answers what do you do? It lists services, features, and scope. It's accurate, it's professional, and it's commoditizing, because it speaks in the vocabulary of your craft, not the vocabulary of the buyer's problem. VP language answers what is happening in my industry, and what should I do about it? It names the shift reshaping the buyer's P&L, the stakes if they get it wrong, and the decision they're privately wrestling with. It speaks in the vocabulary of their job, not yours. A VP doesn't lie awake thinking about your deliverables; they lie awake thinking about the board meeting, the number that's slipping, the competitor that just moved, the trend their CEO read about and now wants an answer on. The translation is concrete. "We run paid acquisition campaigns" is vendor language. "Most DTC brands built their growth model on a customer-acquisition cost that assumed cheap, abundant social impressions, and that assumption broke 18 months ago, which is why your blended CAC keeps climbing no matter how good the creative is" is VP language. Same underlying service. Completely different conversation. The first competes against every other media buyer; the second is the only person in the room who explained why the buyer's number is moving the wrong direction, and explaining the problem precisely is most of the credibility you need to be trusted with the solution. The first sentence belongs in a positioning narrative that makes you the obvious choice only after you've earned attention with the second. Notice that VP language requires you to know things the buyer's current vendor doesn't bother to articulate. That's the entire wedge. The 54% who realize "someone else understands us better" are responding to exactly this, not a competitor with more services, but one who named the shift first.

Section 5

How do you find the shift the buyer actually cares about?

The shift is rarely your service category. It's the macro change forcing the buyer to act, the thing that makes doing nothing more expensive than hiring you. Your job is to find it before the conversation starts, because leading with the shift is what separates a diagnosis from a pitch. Sources are mundane and available. Read the buyer's industry trade press, not yours. Read the earnings calls and investor letters of the public companies in their sector, that's where the anxieties of an entire industry get said out loud in plain language. Read the regulatory changes, the input-cost trends, the platform shifts, the labor-market moves that hit their margins. Then ask the diagnostic question: what is becoming more expensive, more risky, or more uncertain for this buyer that wasn't 18 months ago? That delta is the shift. Your service is merely the response to it. This is where most operators get the sequence backwards. They try to make their service sound more strategic. The move is the opposite: make the buyer's problem sound more precisely understood than anyone else has managed, and let your service be the obvious response. The diagnosis earns the prescription. If your discovery process is still opening with capability questions instead of shift questions, that's a demand and qualification problem worth fixing upstream before you ever get to scope.

Section 6

What about the honest objection: doesn't this just take longer?

It does, and pretending otherwise would be dishonest. Vendor language is fast, you can list services in one sentence and quote a price in two. VP language demands homework: you have to actually understand the buyer's industry well enough to say something their incumbent vendor hasn't. That's real work, and it doesn't scale by copy-pasting a capabilities deck across every prospect. There's also a failure mode worth naming. Done badly, "speaking VP language" becomes vague trend-name-dropping, "AI is changing everything," "the market is shifting", generic enough that it demonstrates no understanding at all and reads as filler. That's worse than an honest services list, because it signals you're performing insight rather than possessing it. The 54% and 60% effects reward specificity about the buyer's actual P&L, not buzzword fluency. If you can't name a shift precisely enough that the buyer thinks "how did they know that's my exact problem," you haven't done the homework yet, say less and dig more. The honest tradeoff is this: VP language costs you preparation time per prospect, and in exchange it removes you from price comparison and lets you charge a premium . For a high-volume, low-ticket service, that math may not work. For any operator selling five-and-up engagements where one premium deal is worth a dozen commodity ones, the preparation pays for itself the first time you skip a bidding war. Know which business you're running before you adopt the approach.

Section 7

The BGA framework: Speak VP Language, Not Vendor Language

The pivot from commodity to premium has three moves. Run them in order, the sequence is the strategy. 1. Lead with the Shift, not the service. Open every first conversation, proposal, and piece of content on the trend reshaping the buyer's P&L, not your capability deck. Concrete rule: the first 90 seconds of a discovery call and the first paragraph of any outreach must contain zero description of what you sell. If you can't get through the opening without naming a deliverable, you haven't found the shift yet. Metric to watch: in your next five first-conversations, count how many you open with a buyer-industry insight versus a service description. Target is five of five. 2. Out-understand the incumbent. Demonstrate you grasp the buyer's business better than the vendor they already pay. This is the 54%/70% wedge, you're not trying to look more capable, you're trying to look more comprehending. Concrete action: before any pitch, write one sentence about the buyer's situation that their current vendor would never say because it requires understanding their industry, not just your craft. If you can't write that sentence, you're not ready to pitch. Rule of thumb: if your insight could be copy-pasted onto another prospect in a different industry, it's not specific enough to move the 54%. 3. Earn the premium, then the RFP. Buyers who feel understood will pay more, 60%, and invite you in before scope is even defined, 86% . So invert the order of every conversation: diagnosis first, scope second, price last. Concrete rule: do not present pricing or a statement of work until the buyer has verbally confirmed your read on their situation ("yes, that's exactly the problem"). That confirmation is your signal you've moved from vendor to advisor; pricing discussed before it will be compared, pricing discussed after it will be evaluated on value. Once the diagnosis lands, the path from agreement to closed engagement is a conversion problem, not a discount negotiation. The tagline that holds all three together: stop selling the deliverable, start selling the diagnosis. The deliverable is what makes you a vendor. The diagnosis is what makes you the only one in the room. If you want to pressure-test where your own positioning sits on the vendor-to-VP spectrum, the growth diagnostic walks you through the self-assessment, and the StoryOS playbook is the full operating manual for building a point of view that does this work before you're in the room.

Section 8

You're running Speak VP Language right when…

You're running it right when a prospect's first reaction to you isn't "what do you charge?" but "how did you know that's exactly what we're dealing with?" You're running it right when you can get through an entire opening conversation without naming a single deliverable, because the buyer is too busy nodding at your read on their industry. You're running it right when you've stopped trying to sound more strategic and started making the buyer's problem sound more precisely understood than their current vendor ever managed. You're running it right when price has migrated to the last ten minutes of the conversation instead of the first, and when it shows up, the buyer is asking what it costs to work with you specifically, not what the going rate is for your category. And you're running it wrong the moment you catch yourself reaching for a trend buzzword you can't tie to a concrete line on the buyer's P&L, that's the tell that you're performing understanding instead of demonstrating it.

FAQ

Direct answers for operators.

Doesn't refusing to describe my service just confuse buyers about what I sell?

No, you still describe it, you just sequence it correctly. You lead with the shift in their industry and your read on their situation, and the service becomes the obvious response to a problem you've already articulated. By the time you name the deliverable, the buyer wants it, because you've established why it matters. The mistake isn't describing your service; it's describing it first, before you've demonstrated any understanding of their world.

What if I work in a boring or stable industry where there's no big "shift"?

Every industry has pressure points, rising input costs, a regulatory change, a labor squeeze, a platform dependency, a margin getting thinner. The shift doesn't have to be dramatic; it has to be true and specific to the buyer's P&L. Read their trade press and the earnings calls of public companies in their sector to find what's quietly getting more expensive or riskier. That delta is your shift, even in a "stable" market.

Is this just thought leadership for marketing, or does it actually affect deals?

It affects deals directly. In the 2025 Edelman-LinkedIn survey of 3,484 executives, 56% of target buyers use thought leadership as part of their vendor evaluation process , 86% say strong thought leadership makes them likely to invite an organization into the RFP , and 60% say it makes them willing to pay a premium . Demonstrated point of view is now a buying criterion, not a brand-awareness nicety.

How is this different from just being good at sales?

Sales technique works on the people in the room. This works on the people who aren't, the hidden buyers in the committee you'll never meet, who evaluate you through what you've published and articulated rather than what you pitched. As IBM's Anthony Marshall puts it, traditional marketing can't impact opinions of individuals you can't even identify, but quality thought leadership can . You can't out-pitch someone you'll never meet; you can only out-understand their industry on a page they'll read without you.

Joshua Agonya Pi'Rwot

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Joshua Agonya Pi'Rwot

Founder, Business Growth Accelerator · Country Director, AVODA Group Uganda · EMBA

Joshua helps service-business operators turn scattered marketing into a clear path from first attention to booked call. He is Founder of Business Growth Accelerator and Country Director of AVODA Group Uganda.